PROPER SLUG LINES:
EX-INT.
EX-INT.
DON'T BE TOO VAGUE OR OVERLY COMPLICATED
DON'T BURY SCENES IN ACTION SECTION. DON'T PUT MULTIPLY SCENES IN PARAGRAPH OF ACTION. BREAK THEM OUT AND MAKE THEM SEPARATE SCENES WITH SEPARATE SLUG LINES.
GRAMMAR SPELLING
FUTURE/ PAST TENSE MIXUPS. ONLG IN THE PRESENT TENSE.
GOES LIKES GARBAGE WRITING
SHOW NOT TELL
WE CANT SEE WHAT CHARACTERS
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